Looking for a little criticism on a track I'm working on

Hey DJTT, beginner producer and aspiring DJ here. I've been working on some new Techno stuff in Ableton, and after a few hours work I'd like to get some professional opinions and advice. I know this track needs work, and I just want to get a better feel for where I need to improve and focus on my work. So without further adieu, heres the rough draft track, so tell me what you think!



Feel free to give critique, advice, and ideas on where to take the track!
Please do realize though, I'm not a skilled producer (yet) and I'm already aware of that, so be gentle :P

Thanks!
DJ Gleebs