electro house track

Here's a track I just finished

Thoughts? Anyone?

So typing this as I listen, I'm not a producer so really I don't know much on the technicalities, what you're getting is a general listener's point of view. I think your breakdown is too busy (from 2.01 onwards). I'd get rid of what you have in the background. It will also do your build up a bit better.

It might be because I'm listening on a laptop but I do think your kick needs to be more present throughout the track.

Hey man thanks, it was my first work so it definitely gonna be flawed. I heard it on some real monitors finally and youre right the kick is a bit lacking (I used my dj headphones to mix it and always turn down the bass to compensate).

Holy shit, another electro house track for all of us to listen to!