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    Default Critique my business card design

    I searched for the thread I made before with the original design, but I couldn't find it so I made a new one. I tooke the feedback I got from the first design and completely redid the it. People said the first card was too crowded and needed to be simplified. Here is the first design if you want to see it.
    front:http://i713.photobucket.com/albums/w...sCardFront.png
    back:http://i713.photobucket.com/albums/w...ssCardBack.png
    New Design
    Front

    Back

    Thoughts?

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    Clean. Very clean.

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    nice and clean,
    you highlght the more important info and you do not put too much on iy\t
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    Use a little less bright of a color and make sure u know exactly what pantone ur using before it goes to print. ive had shit print purple that showed blue on my screen.

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    *writes down number*
    *looks up*
    *turns red*
    what? im lonely


    no but really. it looks good
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    Quote Originally Posted by theory28 View Post
    *writes down number*
    *looks up*
    *turns red*
    what? im lonely


    no but really. it looks good
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    Quote Originally Posted by chrisw View Post
    OH YEAH i went there

    im on a meme roll
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    like it. inspiring me to do something similar.

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    if you arent good with computers, id recommend finding a local design artist (or friend learning the biz) and offer up some cash for a few rough designs.

    theres also a bidding place where you request a design, and people do the work based on your submitted "will pay" rate. cant remember the name, though im sure that service is googleable.

    i wouldnt recommend sharpening your teeth on something you want to present professionally, however.
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    Like the colors and I am a fan of serious business (and the fact you listed disco). huge improvement from your other thread

    also, Chicago west 'burbs represent!

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