first track made in ableton. Feedback please!!!!

[paulyoung4]

hey guys title explains it all really. looking for your criticism rather it good or bad. thanks to all the readers!

respect,
paul iv

[16b441khz]

Very groovey. I like it. I think it needs something extra, some sort of ambience, thats subtle in the background just to give it some more depth and space.

[paulyoung4]

i appreciate the structured criticism and that makes alot of sense of giving it more depth. thanks man! anybody else out there with some feedback?!?

[deviantdigi]

I agree w/ 16b. Its missing something dramatic or bold. But your on you way, at this rate your future in producing is looking rather promising.

ITS ALSO MISSING A DOWNLOAD BUTTON IN THE LINK!!! XD

[Dav1d11]

Its a great start. It seems to me that you are taking a long time to say what your sayin. I would suggest more one shots, effect layers to change it up, and crash cymbals make things pretty epic.
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[paulmcd201]

paul the soundcard on my parents laptop aint great im stuck down at their house, but from what i could here i liked, but as i said i couldnt get a good listen to it.

As soon as i do i will defo be back with some feedback.

[paulmcd201]

like the track paul although its not something i would normally listen to its wery down beat, production wise i couldnt fault it it is missing something that would make it stand out i loved what you did with the hats though