(DUBSTEP) Another Random Walk

[WhiteApple]

hey guy here something i made lastly. im kind of proud of it but unsure of the result. would like some feedback on it for know whats other ears think

[looneygeorge]

definately trippy, but I feel it lacks structure and a melody that is easier to follow :-)

you should definately be proud of what you have made.

[WhiteApple]

thanks for feedback. i understand you feeling about the melodie. but wut wrong w/ the struture exsactly? where & what?

[PForce]

Structure should be like intro, build up, drop, meat... back to intro, build up, second drop, meat, outro.

Does that make sense? The second drop and second meat should be slightly a altered version of your first baseline.

[WhiteApple]

Structure should be like intro, build up, drop, meat... back to intro, build up, second drop, meat, outro.

Does that make sense? The second drop and second meat should be slightly a altered version of your first baseline.

looks like its make sense. nice point of view