First work in Ableton Live (Tech House)

[djbfly]

This is my first track in progress

I need to work but i'm looking for feedback

Enjoy and thanks !

[mattcheau]

very nice. two suggestions. for the sake of symmetry, i would extend the lyrics-sans-bassline (@1:35) another 16 beats so that the second drop comes 128 beats after the first drop. and i was also waiting for the second drop to REALLY drop. i like how the lyrics run different starting then, but you should add more sound/s too. other than that, i like. impressive first work.