new electrohouse track(free soundcloud download!)

[jerrywc]

what up everyone...havent posted a mix in a few weeks caus i been workin on tracks....here is one...if you likey you can get it fo free at my soundcloud

holla!!!

Jerry W.C.

[jerrywc]

bizump

[farhanashraf]

dling!

[jerrywc]

anyone have any advice...constructive critisim? how does my mix/mastering job sound....did everything myself

[farhanashraf]

will let u know after i hear it

[jerrywc]

cool cool

[Bassline Brine]

I liked it as a good foundation. But where's the bloody drop?

That's really all my critique.

[jerrywc]

there are some drops....i know they are more of a "pop format" or not so extended....but you can see by the waveform of the song that there are two of them....

[Gapout]

Track is good but i agree with bassline. IMO there needs to be a lot more "tension" before your drops. You need to have something to give the crowd a good "Bassface" hahaha. As well i think you need to decrease your levels pre-drop. or at least kick out all low range and add some effects to transition into your drop. I think with your current format, if you were to add some vocals the lack of tension pre-drop wouldnt be as noticeable.

With music production becoming so much more available to the everyday person, you need to make your songs that much more unique to stand out.

Think of EDM-music producing like sex.

Getting naked/forplay - intro
Gettin to Business - Chorus/Verse
Rise before drop - Wild Money Seks
Drop - Orgasm.
Outro-Cuddling if your into that thing

Just my 2 cents

[jerrywc]

gapout....thanks for the constructive criticism!!!!

i will try to add some more tension....
i like your comparison