Critique this track for me. Scream bass good? :P

[NotSoSiniSter]

Let me know whatcha think. I take advice well. :P How do make this song better? :P

I mixed this track on some shitty ear buds...is the kick too loud?

[coupon]

the kick is lacking oomph

[botstein]

Not mastered.

[NotSoSiniSter]

the kick is lacking oomph

0.o What kinda oomph? Should I add some kinda high shelf layer to give it a good stab?

[NotSoSiniSter]

Not mastered.

I did master it out to the best of my abilities. What do I need to fix?

[botstein]

pmed.

[NotSoSiniSter]

shit i totally put this in the wrong category...fml. Moderator...?

[coupon]

0.o What kinda oomph? Should I add some kinda high shelf layer to give it a good stab?

mm...im no producer, just a listener. but from what i can hear, theres really not much going in the lower frequencies with the kick. it just kinda sounds really flat.

with that said, i really like the synths

[NotSoSiniSter]

gaa really? I think I over did the kick a little bit trying to get a thump. I think I'll eq it some more. :P

[interFEAR]

The drops feels empty. The bass feels weak and it seems to be missing out on a lot of mid range. You've got a much richer sound in your breakdowns.