FIRST PRODUCTION: Unfinished Business

[WastedYouth]

There you go, a preview of my first own track, begun from scratch.

All comments are welcome, and yes i'm a beginner

Thanks!

[JasonBay]

Why's it so short?

[WastedYouth]

Why's it so short?

Because I don't have a decent drop in my mind, plus it would be too boring if I last this 3 mins,
I've got an idea, but it doesn't get further than this at this moment.

[JasonBay]

That's not really much of a track then, just a rough idea. Come back when you actually have something finished and we'll be able to give you more useful and constructive input then.

This is like putting uncooked dough with some raw cheese and a tomato infront some one and asking them what they think of your pizza

[WastedYouth]

That's not really much of a track then, just a rough idea. Come back when you actually have something finished and we'll be able to give you more useful and constructive input then.

This is like putting uncooked dough with some raw cheese and a tomato infront some one and asking them what they think of your pizza

God.. You're such a retard.
And that's NOT because you don't like/ give a contructive comment on my 'track'
You're comments are just pathetic.

[JasonBay]

You're comments are just pathetic.

So is posting unfinished work expecting people to help you because you're too lazy to finish it

[seitz]

oh hello 1980's...needs more bits

[WastedYouth]

So is posting unfinished work expecting people to help you because you're too lazy to finish it

Too lazy to finish?
Oh man you got me!!! I'm expecting some comments that will finish my song!!!!

No.

Just some comments about the fucking bassline or claps or whatever.
What's the problem with that, oh master-producer?
Didn't you ever ask for an opinion?


You should think before commenting on a beginner's track, most of the time they don't know much and like some help.

[seitz]

is the intention a chiptune?

[WastedYouth]

is the intention a chiptune?

Don't quite know what you mean with that, i'm pretty new to all the production terms..
You mean clips (like drumsounds/basslines) brought together in one song?

Yes and no, the drumline was indeed a clip, but that's the only one.
The rest is 'self-made'.

I know it's not great, tought i'd get some decent help about things I just can't know cause i'm a beginner.