You have the same bass sound throughout the whole track. mix it up so that when there is a chorus its a different bass sound than in the verses and intro etc. use reverb so things sound like the are distant and some are closer. there is a tonne of things but that is what first comes to min.
intro is very very very very very flat sounding...when making an intro you have to have it sound interesting...if your going to do something simple like this then the sounds have to WOW people
your focus is the synths but for something sounding like this the drums need to be the focus...your drums arnt coming through very well and they seem flat as well
throughout the entire thing is the same sounds...theres no evolution....electro is like a mountain with the begining and first breakdown leading up to the peak of the drop and it keeps going up and up until you start going towards the end where you go back down....things need to evolve and stay interesting
What other people said plus those drums sound of place. If you are going for electro house those don't sound like electro house drums- kind of breakbeat-ish and the x0x drum samples seem kind of out of place. If you listen electro house style percussion is a lot more minimal 4 on the floor but it is deliberate.
I don't listen to too much electro house anymore but if you want to hear drums programmed right and solid groove:
Last edited by Xonetacular; 07-04-2012 at 09:56 PM.