Dubstyle (WORK IN PROGRESS)

[danielriosrendon]

So this is a work in progress, but what do you guys think?
http://soundcloud.com/soydany/dubstyle-wip

Thanks for listening and please be honest on the comments .

[Dwonka27]

not bad but needs more umff... the track has no climax or build up and the drop isnt enough to make it stand out... great effort and with some significant tweeks this could be a gem

just my 2 cents
hope u dont mind my honesty
Dwonka27

[Eric Day]

Good basic start. Not sure where you're at in the progress with what you still have planned to do, what you're going for, etc. So its hard to give any specific feedback without feeling like I'm telling you how I think it should go.

As mentioned, adding some automation to give it life is key. The mid range melody and bass sound cool individually, but seem to clash a bit to my ear when they come together. Are they in the same key? Do you have any plans to add something to fill in the high range? My 2 cents, but I would add a third main layer with a higher octave arppegiated melody that fit in with it, or something of the like.