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    Default Techno Track : "Abstract"

    Just finished this and I think it's a gem
    Looking for constructive critisism though so please be ruthless so I can improve my production skills..
    http://soundcloud.com/bartpoort93/abstract
    Thanks in advance

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    *bump* nothing? no feedback at all?

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    I liked the sub bass, it's pretty atmospheric, there is a lot of interesting stuff going on. I thought it progressed well. The main synth (or bass, I suck at naming instruments, really need to get better at that) (the one that goes ta-tam-tam) could be a bit more varied, maybe have more fluctuation (because it does a bit), it's a very integral part of the track so it got kind of repetitive in the first part. I like the deepness of the second part. But yea, only criticism I have is that. Otherwise I thought it was a good sounding track, nice drums and percussion, attention to detail with arrangement. It's cool, man!

    I hope that wasn't too lame of a comment haha.

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    Hey, thanks man, not a lame comment ^^ you gave me something to work with. My friends think my work is good but yeah they are my friends so you never know haha

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