i need some tips for finishing this?

[miedema]

[Awesomer]

I listened on the speakers of a LCD TV in my hotel room while drinking "Lagunitas Sucks!". Go 2013! Here's my feedback.

Needs more cowbell.

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But seriously, about all I can say in a critical sense is that things sound a bit dry; small filter progression on some instruments (especially the bass elements?) could really add to that sense of build and permutation. Instruments don't seem very EQ banded/isolated from each other. I also think you could make this good 7 minutes into an even better 5 minutes. Otherwise track is solid, sample is funny, I lolled. I'd probably DJ this track due to the minimal jacking and the lulz. Also you misspelled repetitive.

Thanks for posting, and keep at it!