My third song ever, please rate, leave feedback, follow on soundcloud

[Jhamilton831]

https://soundcloud.com/jhamilton831/...s-science-john

This is a remix that I did for a friend. please leave feedback/suggestions

[Polygon]

REALLY dig the voice sample, i just love those, plus, SCIENCE!
I'd suggest sidechaining everything a little more, just to let the kick breathe, and replacing the drums with a different, mellower drumline during the breakdown, because having the same drum track over the whole song can get a bit monotonous
Also, from 1.53, i'd suggest putting the cutoff not just to the synth, but to the kick too, since it will help with the buildup, also a little white noise could help
A little reverb on the synths, some 16th hihats or rides in the background during the second drop, and you're good to go
Great melody, keep it up

[Jhamilton831]

Thanks for the feedback