So, after buying my first synth and some Adam F5 Monitors - I've finally got the first draft of my first track done!

It's hardly going to change the world - so I'd really appreciate as much constructive feedback as possible.

There are a few things I'm still trying to improve upon (and equally figure out how to improve), but would really appreciate hearing what you guys have to say. For example I've got 2 different kick drums in the mix, one is only used on the 2 drops and outro (which I think sounds decent), and the other one (used throughout) sounds a bit puny I think. So if anyone has any good sample links that would help too haha!

https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/...%20Vulture.wav