My first real production (Electro House)

[De Smint]

Hey Guys,

this is my first real production. So please listen to it and give me feedback! Thx

[Sketch]

Not bad at all, I love the build-ups. The drop and melody could do with being a little more substantial and having a few less quiet spots, and the lead in the drop would sound nicer without the key change (in my opinion.) The mix and master on this one is spot on, but perhaps a little more bass Nice work though