First track, all feedback welcome! Kitchen Sink - Stressless Steve

[Student]

Hope you guys like it. I know I do. Next track should be more varied though

[ImNotDedYet]

I really liked the flow of the snares and hats as well as the changing them up throughout the song. However, melodically, as you mentioned...it needs variation. I liked the strings in the breakdown. Keeping those after the drop to provide a bit more interest would be good. Mix-wise, it sounded pretty solid although I didn't listen overly critically.

I'd say a pretty good first song. Keep it up.

[Student]

Thank you for your feedback! I've listened to what you've said and I've added and changed some things. Please have another listen

[miniweapon]

Maybe try moving to the relative major for the breakdown and adding some chords. You have a lot of monophonic melody's with no harmonic content. Give it some harmony in the intro and breakdown and it will do wonders.

good luck!
Miniweapon

[Student]

Thank you for your first post being constructive feedback. I'm not altering this song anymore to prevent confusion, but I will take your feedback into account on my next song, which I'm working on now