The other thread made me think. Any feedback much appreciated thank youuuuu :thumb up:
http://www.brchnofficial.com
The other thread made me think. Any feedback much appreciated thank youuuuu :thumb up:
http://www.brchnofficial.com
looks good..simple and clean...
Weapons, not food, not homes, not shoes
Not need, just feed the war cannibal animal
I like it too, seems there's not that much content couldn't you make a splash screen of your photo that quickly fades into all the other pages content and then just get rid of the tabs until you have more stuff?
its nice and clean, although pure white and pure black is too much for the eyes. try adding a 5% black box over top of the bg to grey it out a bit.
I like it. But, I wish I could see where you are based at directly on welcome page.
Thank you guys
Some additional constructive thoughts?
I like the open, but does it scale well? Larger seems to be fine. Under 800x600 there is a menu for the social media; it gets stuck on Firefox and Chrome 37.0.2062.124 (not sure what development platform you're using).
The bio page and contact are sparse (which is good; never be afraid of white space)... have you considered combining them? I like the location map, but that could be smaller or integrated.
The cover image is an "action shot", the bio image is almost a selfie. I'd recommend trying another action shot; doesn't need to be B&W.
Again, just some random thoughts.
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Greybeard Turntablist
Z2 / 1200's / X1 MK2 / F1 / Maschine MK2
Thanks man I really appreciate all that!
It seems to scale fine in safari and is responsive to different platforms but I never knew it had issues in those browsers; will look into it.
Will give it thought.
Haha that was taken right before going on at an open air party!
Much appreciated!!
did you build this? its good! I might need one built for myself!
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