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    On second look I would crop it a little (zoom in). Also, remove the sprinklers.
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    I like the photo as is barring the pink area. I would personally change the 3 to a complimentary color and move the title up a bit. Otherwise

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    Don't like the font. The photo is cool, but could have been even better if the passage way were positioned a bit more off-center.
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    Quote Originally Posted by 3heads View Post
    Don't like the font. The photo is cool, but could have been even better if the passage way were positioned a bit more off-center.
    the font for the logo was designed from scratch, that part is not changing. but i could change the 3

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    I made a few changes it looks alot better now


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    No, that blur looks horrible, imo.
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    change the "3" to a darker blue...it gets lost being a lighter color...
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    No, that blur looks horrible, imo.
    1. Agreed - I would attempt a tilt shift or Isis blur on it "maybe", although I think it looks cleaner without.
    2. I would take the poster out entirely from the image - it adds nothing and makes the image look clumsy
    3. I would center the image dead on and make sure the rotation is correct- its distracting that the text above is so off in comparison.
    4. Lastly I would change the color on "3" to the same teal color on the darkest floor tile from the bottom of the photo rather than the light blue.


    The photo is gorgeous, just a few slight changes to make
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    Quote Originally Posted by deevey View Post
    1. Agreed - I would attempt a tilt shift or Isis blur on it "maybe", although I think it looks cleaner without.
    2. I would take the poster out entirely from the image - it adds nothing and makes the image look clumsy
    3. I would center the image dead on and make sure the rotation is correct- its distracting that the text above is so off in comparison.
    4. Lastly I would change the color on "3" to the same teal color on the darkest floor tile from the bottom of the photo rather than the light blue.


    The photo is gorgeous, just a few slight changes to make


    thats a great idea for the color change i shall try that. and yes no more blur

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