On second look I would crop it a little (zoom in). Also, remove the sprinklers.
On second look I would crop it a little (zoom in). Also, remove the sprinklers.
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I like the photo as is barring the pink area. I would personally change the 3 to a complimentary color and move the title up a bit. Otherwise
Don't like the font. The photo is cool, but could have been even better if the passage way were positioned a bit more off-center.
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I made a few changes it looks alot better now
No, that blur looks horrible, imo.
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change the "3" to a darker blue...it gets lost being a lighter color...
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Not need, just feed the war cannibal animal
No, that blur looks horrible, imo.
- Agreed - I would attempt a tilt shift or Isis blur on it "maybe", although I think it looks cleaner without.
- I would take the poster out entirely from the image - it adds nothing and makes the image look clumsy
- I would center the image dead on and make sure the rotation is correct- its distracting that the text above is so off in comparison.
- Lastly I would change the color on "3" to the same teal color on the darkest floor tile from the bottom of the photo rather than the light blue.
The photo is gorgeous, just a few slight changes to make
Last edited by deevey; 12-21-2014 at 04:44 PM.
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