Unfinished remix - Make this your day (trance)
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    Default Unfinished remix - Make this your day (trance)

    Hi y'all,
    I thought I might just post my progress on a remix I've been working on lately. It's a remix to Fabio XB & Micky Vi's 'Make this your day'.

    It is in no way finished but I like the vocals a lot so couldn't wait to work on this one
    edit: please don't burn this down as this is one of my first more serious production/remix attempts..
    edit 22/11 - I think it's done but it has been relocated here comments appreciated
    Last edited by sj03w4t; 11-22-2009 at 09:24 AM.

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    update: I've edited some parts, the intro and the end of this unfinished track is different.. Comment please

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    okay I've edited it once again

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    Easy with the cymbals there!

    Good:
    Powerful vocal
    great bassline
    good smooth texture
    good choice of complimenting sounds.

    Needs:
    another melodic layer in there to support the lead
    more careful selection and tweaking of hihat and snare sounds
    the third section to come in earlier.
    a reprise of earlier themes layered at the end
    a run-out.
    Last edited by Fatlimey; 11-06-2009 at 01:02 PM.

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    Wow thanks for the feedback!
    I lowered the volume on the crash, and replaced the hihat and added some fx to it. Also I added another layer arpeggiator which I quite like but hey that's why I added it..
    I need to think about ending this song but not sure how yet..
    Thanks again

    edit: something went wrong with the uploading but I've uploaded it now. Should be cool in a couple of minutes!
    Last edited by sj03w4t; 11-08-2009 at 11:14 AM.

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    Darn, seems not to be working nicely. Another attempt:
    soundcloud not cooperating.. check it out here!

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    So I think I've finished this track and uploaded it to Soundcloud again because soundcloud wont let free users reupload a file -.-
    Check it out and let me know what you think

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    solid remix. nice one.

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    cheers mate

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    hey mate! this is a very nice remix u did there! love the way u distorted the vocals it reminds me in some way of imogen heap - hide and seek.
    keep on rocking
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