My first song ever! still a work in progress but have a listen

[rablat]

any feedback plz. good bad, any advice is really helpful. thanks

[Jerc]

the first drop sounds like your kick and snare are in the wrong order..

[16b441khz]

who says that the snare has to be on every second measure of a bar and not the first and third?... simple little things done to a track can make them stand out.

[brosephh]

Did you master the track correctly? Doing so can make some elements of the track a lot better.

[the4thImpulse]

the first drop sounds like your kick and snare are in the wrong order..

Wrong traditional order yes but I like it this way, its diffrent and interesting.

I think you need a stronger fast kick layered on the one you have now. at least bring this kick out a bit, it gets los amound everything else in the song.

try some lighter sidechaing on the main melodies to bring out the kick, especialy at 3:17.

[rablat]

hey yea i agree the kick does sound faded, i was trying to get a really heavy kick sound so i removed alot of the high and brought up the lows, it came closer to the sound i was looking for but its a bit spaced out. need to fix that :/ any good tips for a logic neewby :P

[the4thImpulse]

hey yea i agree the kick does sound faded, i was trying to get a really heavy kick sound so i removed alot of the high and brought up the lows, it came closer to the sound i was looking for but its a bit spaced out. need to fix that :/ any good tips for a logic neewby :P

I dont have any logic specific tips (as I dont use logic) but learn to layer and eq drums, I a song I'm working on I have already speant 2 hours on the kick alone and it sounds amazing.

try this video - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-ZL6n6_vdZM

[NicoCollu]

If this is your first ever song, then I think it's a great start!

I agree with the others that the kick needs to be more "pumpy". Layering is a great idea!

Also, look into mastering tracks!
Mastering is what separates amateur producers from pro's in my opinion!!