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Hey all!
I've just posted a new track up - http://soundcloud.com/48k/gravity-3
It's a breaks track and the first thing I've made in over two years, it's not quite finished but i'm not sure what else it needs so I'm gonna leave it for a while and start another one..
If any of you can take a few mins out to have a listen, i'd really love some opinions / criticisms / suggestions for it!
Thanks and enjoy :)
Going to see Meat katie in a few weeks and if he played this id think "yeah ill ave a bit of this"
You say theres something missing ? maybe just a few bleeps at the end of each 8 bars or so, its pretty much on a level in the main sections which i like cus the saw builds up which (i have to say a like a bit of saw teehee) but yeah does need something to pop up every now and again.
The bass line at the end of each phrase could be louder cus its a really nice rolling bassline.
Sounds fucking great at full welly on my system. Production is spot on. Not the usual over processed EQd to fuck stuff that i hear:D
I think its pretty fucking good pal and im not a huge breaks fan.
First track in 2 years ??? Why did you stop, keep going man.
Props :)
Thanks man, glad you like it! I had to have a break due to a couple of big projects I had going on at work, they kinda zapped all my creativity for a while :P
Back on it now though and lovin' it :-)
Anyone else had a listen and got any thoughts?
hi there
yeah i really like your beat patterns, it keeps rolling along nicely.
just a question, what is mastering like in Logic? do you have a VST or does it come with something by default? I am using Reason atm but all my tracks sound very Reasony if you know what i mean
I use Ozone 4 for mastering, it's the business! Have you got any of your tracks up anywhere?
really diggin it brother, it's definitely my kind of music. like karlos said, spot on.
yeah i'll try and upload one to those streaming sights. Might take a little while.Quote:
Originally Posted by rjw
http://soundcloud.com/timinya/asakusa-smile
I'm in Japan now and made this one over the last few days. This is my 3rd track so far so be gentle haha
Just having a listen....
Beats sound solid, nice use of fx to build the track.
Think you could do more with the bass sound, either layer a few diff sounds playing the same riff or program a few variations into the pattern perhaps.
Def needs a break in the riff at some point, even if it's just 8 bars or so somewhere!
Overall though theres a nice groove to it, pretty good going for your 3rd track - keep at it! :)