Crash - Haku (Original mix)

Hey ! :)

I made this track one month ago, i've spent about three weeks on it




I started making music for one year now, and i got a lot of problem getting feedbacks or help on my work...
That's why i joined this forum, hoping to get some advice on my tracks :)

Please leave a feedback or advices to improve my work! i really need some thought on what i do to improve myself !

Hope you'll enjoy guys, good listening :D


PS: By the way, i made a exp video with friends, along with this track:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jpxFd-xgUdA

I dug it. Really great vibe to it.

The only constructive criticism I could provide is making the instrument levels a bit more dynamic - bringing them in and out and bringing them down overall a bit. A little bit of the melodic stuff you brought in later might be nice to gently weave in and break up from the 1 to 3 minute marks as well. But overall a really nice tune.

Well done!

Thanks for the feedback man!

It helps a lot, i'll try to think on this on my future tracks :)

Thanks again!

I'll have a listen later

Per total, great tune! Keep up!

Thanks man!

Pretty good start man I like the dark warehouse type vibe

Haha thanks! glad you liked it :)