I think the biggest problem is your bassline tbh. And don't get me wrong I a fan of big meaty basslines also but yours is just constant in your whole track. And on top of that ita the loudest thing in your track. Then you put some other synth with the same rhythm on top of it and it still bursts through at you. Try lowering that bad boy man, mixing is important in production also. And def play woth arrangement :) take some stuff out and bam you got a break down. I guess all I'm trying to say is while a "big bad bassline" is dope, less is sometimes more :). Hope my 2cents helps you in yoir journey through production :)
