https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=okMJ...ature=youtu.be
Not my cup of tea, musically speaking, and I don't know the original track to make any comparisons. However, sonically speaking, and bearing in mind that the track is being played back through my laptop's speakers via YT, it doesn't sound too bad at all...
The rhythm is great, I like it, maybe you can try to make it a little bit more diverse!
You made a great remix! :) Is this your first remix?