New Track... Give me your input!

[paulyoung4]

Hey guys

heres a track i just finished in ableton. I have put some time into the track so please give me some input and feedback!? It has more of a minimal techy feeling to it. Thanks for your time and listening.



Respect,
PY

[vtvictor45]

its very nice

[Metrojolt]

It seems slow and a bit empty to me. Not much to hold my attention.

[vtvictor45]

ya i think so

[vtvictor45]

as u wish but its good

[paulyoung4]

hey metrojolt thanks for your feedback but why do you think it is empty?

It seems slow and a bit empty to me. Not much to hold my attention.

[Nephew]

Like it a lot, very well done I'd say. Perfect background music but if you're wanting DJ's to play it I would tweak the arrangement.

Good stuff though regardless. Keep the good tunes coming!

[Nephew]

hey metrojolt thanks for your feedback but why do you think it is empty?

Also, don't take what everyone says to heart, have to look at where's it's coming from just like anything else.

Example being I would never ask any of my rock oriented friends what they thought about a new track of mine anymore than I would ask my jock friends what they thought about the new Fallout game.

This board as a whole seems more geared towards dubstep, mashups and electro, not so much contemporary house/techno.

So with that being said, take everything you hear on these boards with a grain of salt and don't try to mold your track to fit what people are saying.

EDIT: Case in point, go check out Metrojolts page and see what he has up on his page.

[paulyoung4]

thanks man! could i ask you though specifically what you mean by tweaking the arrangement?

Like it a lot, very well done I'd say. Perfect background music but if you're wanting DJ's to play it I would tweak the arrangement.

Good stuff though regardless. Keep the good tunes coming!

[Nephew]

Just get a defined intro/outro really, that's all