New house track and i need feeback!

[CryptikBlu]

I mainly do Dubstep and remixes, but this track came very naturally to me. Please let me know what you think!

[LoveBass]

not house

[Chebiva]

not house

Agreed.

[rablat]

hey man i like your track. think its got some good parts but you skip around too much. whats your tempo at? and sounds like ure missing a kick snare pattern that most house songs go for. not sure if ur going for that style but it was what i was expecting.

[paw_20]

Same here, I enjoyed it and saw potential for fleshing it out, but it felt like several distinct tracks you were transitioning between instead of one cohesive piece of music. On that note, and this may have been what you were going for, but I felt like the instruments pushed against each other tempo wise. Like one drum wanted to go faster, another was comfortable, and the lead wanted to go slower.

It also felt a bit unstructured. I couldn't identify a buildup, bridge, chorus etc. But definite potential. I liked the percussion in the middle, kind of techy w/o a driving kick.