New Techno track - Lift Off

[pacustary]

Check out my new techno track, "Lift Off" on sound cloud!
This is the unofficial release of my first finished track- there's still tweaking and fiddling to be done, but this is the first final cut. So check it out and let me know what you think- any feedback is appreciated.

(Keep in mind, I have been producing for less than a year, and by no means am a pro- constructive criticism only, please.)





edit: (I understand I posted this in the wrong section, and I apologize. If it could get moved I'd appreciate it)

[JasonBay]

You have some good ideas there mate, but you need to work on the arrangement a bit more and give it some more structure. Plus a bit more "ear candy" can go a long way.