First Song (Preview) - Feedback please!!!

[Cookish]

Hey guys, first track that Ive made, I produce in ableton live

Would love some feedback on where I can improve and any other comments are welcome!

Recommend wearing headphones or using some decent speakers to hear the low end. Ill probably layer a kick in there at some point. Id say the genre if anything is trap.

Thanks,
Cookish

[Daily Crisis]

Very impressed considering it's your first song, you've got a great idea... Just need to make it more exciting

[sagar4848]

Hey, not bad, though i think u need to organise the samples in a bit better way. I kinda feel its not all co existing. Give the midi a good pattern. Best of luck for your next.

[merlinriver]

Hey Cookish, I played your track and also checked your profile on soundcloud it has good amount of audience but if you want to enhance your exposure soundcloud automator will be helps you.

[WillBirch]

not bad mate ! Make a better variation for the intro. Also it sounds a bit too '8 bit', like a gameboy, make your sounds big and juicy. ALso needs some more build up FX. Keep it up! Ive just started producing myself so I can't say too much

[Cookish]

thanks for all the feedback guys, really appreciate it, I'll definetly use your advice to help improve my track

[AllDay]

This isn't the forum for posting your music so..

[Cookish]

My bad, if a mod could move this to the correct forum it would be much appreciated