Would love some feedback lads please :)

[Rkid_Dan]

http://soundcloud.com/dan-with-a-pla...k-in-progresss

[ian3dge]

need to sort your mastering levels out... dont like the way your audio dips and comes back in... your two riffs work well together, but theres just not enough variation... sounds very much like a work in progress - quite a bit of work to do on this one

keep going though

[Nephew]

Very much agree with Ian on this, solid start to a track, but needs a lot more polishing. The actual writing of the track sounds good, nice ideas and groove, now you just need to get down to the nuts and bolts of it.

[Rkid_Dan]

Cheers guys,
I rustled it all together in about 4 hours so i can kinda say i was expecting comments like that. But thanx i'm now gunna leave it for a while and come back to it