first track, need some critique

[AdamPollard55]

as title says really. need some critique on my first track. I guess it falls under house, but it doesn't really matter. If it's not to your style, then who cares, but criticism is important to any producer wanting to improve, so any comments are more than welcome

Thanks!

Aloe Blacc - I Need A Dollar (Multiplier Remix)

http://soundcloud.com/multiplier/alo...-need-a-dollar

[ohmydaze]

Its kinda cool, very very hard for house. To be honest speed that up to about 140bpm and I know LOADS of people who'd play that.

Its very minimal in its approach. The bass sound is very deep and heavy. I think you've done some cool sampling of the original track. Its not ground breaking at any points, but overall a pretty cool crack. My main thing is there a big market for this type of house, check out the hard tech trance kinda scene, aka Scott Attrill people like that as that might be a style that suits this remix more.

[WhiteApple]

Nice. i like it. Its stylish. but... You really need to fill that up. thing going nice but try adding some fx sound, sweep, ambient shit. really need more climax man. keep it up bro

[AdamPollard55]

thanks for the comments guys! now time to work on something new