New Track Feedback Appreciated (techno, house, elctro??)

[Yeyo]

Hey everyone, im new here going to take a look around the site and see whats happening. I listen to hip hop, and d&b mainly but recently started listening to more techno, house, electro etc... my first attempt at a tune in this category not even sure what category it is to be honest but any feedback is appreciated, its still need work with eqing etc...hope to see you all about

http://soundcloud.com/jbounce-1/sapito

[Wutzlhofer]

this sort of music is a lot about modulating stuff over a long period of time... so when you´ve got some nice elements you think they are woth staying in your track than work with them, apply filters and increase them before you do a break etc. try out whitenoise and increase this aswell before a break. try out room on some elements. sample a kick from a techno track you like (your kicks really weak) and one last thing. don´t do this stuff with the claps to the end of your break like letting them play 4s then 8s, 16, 32. you better try the things i´ve just recommendet.... keep it up bro!