And another house original!

[elliot1106]

If anyone wants download then just message me.
Will end up redoing my mixdown but I'm a bit drunk so what the hell

Samples from some justin martin track and stole the rhythm from that maya jane coles track, all is good

Enjoy

[elliot1106]

Theres definitely a coloration between how bad a track is and how much feedback its get, crazy stuff!

[lolski]

sound could use some more work. try to make the sound "fuller" when there are minimal layers playing e.g. the first 1.5 mins. then use dynamic EQing to lower the presence of these elements to make way for new elements

balance between instruments and vocals could be better too imo

bass should have more presence in the mix. add movement to it

my 2 cents

[elliot1106]

Much appreciated man, I'll probably redo my mixdown in time too. Thanks for the advice, but if you are giving criticism, which will be taken into account its always nice to hear what you think the better parts are to think about in respect to other tracks.

[elliot1106]

Redone!

[elliot1106]

Now with a remix and up for download!