Feedback for this track (Deep House)

[Woah]

https://soundcloud.com/bartpoort93/dub-me/s-MZi52

It's pretty much the basic structure, but I haven't worked on mixdown that much yet. Would like to hear some opinions about how it is right now, what would you like to hear changed? Overall tips on the flow and things like that?
Thanks in advance,

Woah

[JasonBay]

Post again when you have a finished product, and also embed the actual SC player in the post. And possibly post it in the right section as well

[Woah]

Thanks jason for your feedback, you are really helpful...
It's a private link so people can click if they like. I don't want to mess up my soundcloud with demo's and stuff like that.
I am not saying it is finished, I am asking for actual advice on what you would change about this track. It is just the overall structure not a finished project and I am looking for some tips and techniques to make it better, production seemed to be the most suitable for this thread so why would it be in the wrong section?

[JasonBay]

This area is about discussing specific techniques and approaches, not for critiquing your production.

The Mixes, Productions and Podcasts area is specific for that need.


Also, I gave you my advice. Post a finished product so we can see where you are overall and then give you specific feedback on the final product, not a work in progress.