Feedback for a portion of my Missy Elliott remix in progress

[cielomobile]

Hey guys, I'm making a Missy Elliott bootleg of "Ching-a-Ling" and I'd appreciate a little feedback on the main section here. I've included the build to it and the beginning of the breakdown (the breakdown is nowhere near finished), just so you can get an idea of its context in the song.

It's not mastered, so I'm mainly looking for composition-related feedback...are all the elements there, does the structure work, does it flow, do you feel the groove? What's missing?

Rep for feedback of course.

Linky: [ame]http://www.zshare.net/audio/77234322fee7acf0/[/ame]

(You don't have to download to listen; just click the link and it'll play like soundcloud.)

[cielomobile]

Anyone? 32 views and no one listened?

[Glen]

i like it....

[vondoom]

Can you post the whole track because I can't gain anything about the structure of a song by listening to 1 minute of it.

[cielomobile]

Yeah I'm almost done with a rough cut of the whole thing. I wasn't looking for structural feedback so much as feedback of just that section, but I'll post the whole thing in a bit.

[cielomobile]

Alright, here's the full thing; anyone care to give me some feedback? (And I know the outro needs some work.)

[ame]http://www.zshare.net/audio/77409477e96e4c3d/[/ame]