Subsonic - Simple Minds

[ibarry]

Hey, heres a little preview of something ive been working on today while being snowed in. It's rough etc but wouldn't mind your feedback. We might record vocals for it if we develop it further. But here goes:

[levvis]

Intro and breakdowns are good, my advice would be to tweak your lead synth a bit. Pretty boring and predictable imo.. Doesn't need to be much, maybe just change its pattern/add a layer/add fx to it in the second (chorus I guess? ~2.15) part.
not bad for a draft but yeah I wasn't overly entertained.. Honest feedback only!

[ibarry]

Thanks, I prefer honest feedback. Other people either say nothing or say it's good. I'll alter the pattern a little and add another element probably

[levvis]

I'm the same dude at this stage I pretty much take positive feedback as useless feedback. Be sure to chuck the tweaked version up!