first attempt at making house music

[buddha131]

http://soundcloud.com/traphau5/house-attempt

[16b441khz]

kick sounds way to distorted and the chorus is too much like the intro, it felt like it built up to nothing.

[BradCee]

feels like something is missing in the middle section. but not sure what...

need something with a swing to it in there maybe? and maybe move the kick on beat 8 forwards or back 1/2 a beat? just to get away from the 'steppy' feel?

[Amondsham]

Music is so gooooooooooooooooooooooooooood .I really like it. if you have more share it.

[ctrld]

dude. traphau5? are you serious?

[Nicky H]

dude. traphau5? are you serious?

Haha thats what I thought

And yeah its a bit distorted..