Tell me what you guys think!
Thanks!!
Tell me what you guys think!
Thanks!!
good ideas, just not well executed. I think the biggest thing for me is that the vocal sample isn't time stretched so its way out of time.. so is everything else.
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I'd pretty much agree with Asand, really good ideas, but a lot of the track comes off as "random" - elements don't feel like they're on a regular 4/8/16 bars.
I've got a feeling that the vocal sample speed might be deliberate, but the track seems to speed up with it, so I'm not sure.
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On the creative side, it's pretty decent, a lot of elements are at work which is awesome!
But on the technical side, this is just a mess. there's no phasing going on, random kicks or synths will just pop out of nowhere and you need to work on making the vocals in sync with everything else. Just use warp markers and stretch some areas or shrink some areas.
Thanks for the feedback guys! I know I am not very good with song structure. I tried to layer lots in this song and that probably did not help the situation haha can you recommend any tutorials or anything to help with this? I know I need to learn and understand it better...
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