Not another one of these threads especially when it's crap! HAHA jk nicely done man listened to most the entries and you earned my vote.
Not another one of these threads especially when it's crap! HAHA jk nicely done man listened to most the entries and you earned my vote.
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Thought you might want some actual feedback rather than just a handful of votes. Here's my analysis anyway.
1:05 Track A too quiet and thin
2:25-2:51 Track A too quiet, strange filtering going on, highs from A left too long
3:37 Vocal sample cut off, then played too quietly
4:43 Random drop in volume
8:40 More strange uneven filtering
9:14 High pass filter tail
11:35 Unnecessary high pass filter? Making Track A thin and quiet, tailing off and sitting in the background.
13:25 More high pass filtering? Uneven changes in volume? Sounding thin again.
19:22 Another high pass filter tail, where proper phrasing would have sounded much better.
21:28 Filter..
22:40 Track A sounding very thin (filtered again?) with overpowering bassline from next track
23:11 Random gap/poor overlap. Again, proper phrasing would have avoided this
24:35-25:20 Messy clash between both tracks. Track A sounding thin again throughout.
31:26 Part of the song? Cueing with fader up?
37:00-37:20 Some phrasing would have been nice
38:45 More overdone high pass filter
42:30 Sounding weak again with the filtered track
43:00 Cut off too soon. Echo freeze might have been good here.
45:55 Noisy clash
46:44 Abrupt end, phrasing needed
49:00 Another clash (keys?). Track B needs to be louder too, take out some bass from A
51:47 Another high pass filter tail. Track A should have disappeared by now.
53:03 Part of the track? Or another track sitting in the background?
54:10 Bassline is a little heavy, vocals a little quiet.
54:58 Very thin sounding lead synth + vocals.
56:44 Bad clash. Proper phrasing needed.
59:11 More pounding bassline with thin sounding melody in the background.
61:05 Echo would sound better on the end of the vocals.
As before, EQing and phrasing need work so you might want to avoid the filter+FX for a while until you get those sorted.
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Voted (you are 5th now)
Not too fond of "what Beatport calls Progressive House" but still. Keep it up and best of lucks!
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