New Track | Need feed back!

[-AyeAreTee]

Let me know what you guys think, :eek:

[Nephew]

No idea what you have going on there mate, the groove is very straight, no swing or variation to it to keep it interesting, and all you have going for you is that LFO'ed bass and that even gets old after a while.

Need to go back and look at your arrangement as well. There's nothing exciting about it at all.

And it's dry as hell from what I can hear. No automation or modulation at all from the sounds of it.

Just keep at it mate, you have some good sounds in there but the track as a whole is severely lacking.

[-AyeAreTee]

Lol i appreciate the criticism, its very much unfinished thats why it says it in the name of the track.. i posted to get some feedback from people


So since ive heard all the bad things about my track, how about you tell me somethings i can do to improve it

[Nephew]

I would delete the whole arrangement and start from scratch, and then everything else I said before as well. I'd even go back and rethink the groove as it's very dull, and even go back and look at the mix down again.

[-AyeAreTee]

why ofcourse ill do that


really interested in hearing some your work

[fellis]

I love the drum pattern, I think it's a nice change from some of the simpler patterns out there. And I agree that this tune could benefit from some automation to keep the sound changing through the track which will help keep the interest up.

Good luck!

[-AyeAreTee]

thanks man i appreciate it

[Nephew]

Sure, I'll post some stuff. You can also go to bearport and search Jason Bay to see some stuff

[Nephew]

and




These are older projects though, but these are what I have up at the moment. Have a string of new projects I'm going to be uploading this month so there's more to come.

[-AyeAreTee]

searched, i feel as if its exactly house you explained my track.

Dry as hell, no swing, no variation. Clean mixdown, and good mastering tho.

is that all you have up there? just the ep?