First work - enjoy practise

[primzo]

Hi guys!

That's my first work so please leave some feedback

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5pwHgvyXs8E

I know i could do some corrections, - specially the transition at 0.30 isnt that nice...

Best part is at 0.40 ->
But since that's my first work I will leave it like that and move on to the 2nd work ; )

ty!

[primzo]

BTW, is there any better topic according to my case?
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