My first track......

[mekanism]

Let me know what you think. Its still really rough, and I think I need to EQ it and master it better. I just started using Ableton about a month ago and this is my first completed track.

http://soundcloud.com/mekanism-1/echoes

[mekanism]

I know how busy we all are these days but I would appreciate some constructive criticism if anyone has the time to give it a listen.

[JasonBay]

Go back in the studio and develop your craft more, and then come back when you have something that's finished. If you still think you need to EQ it better then you should have done that before posting it on here for the whole world to see.

And instead of posting it on here trying to get everyone's attention, try and find people who are doing stuff similar to what you are and share projects with them. You'll get much better and honest feedback that way I'd say and you'll help each other be more critical of your work.

[mekanism]

Will do, thanks.