Need opinions on this beast flyer of my next event im having
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    Default Need opinions on this beast flyer of my next event im having

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    I would move october and the date down so that it's not behind the ear things.
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    Quote Originally Posted by DJKyleHughes View Post
    I would move october and the date down so that it's not behind the ear things.
    +1

    Also, it needs some flaming letters...

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    Quote Originally Posted by DJKyleHughes View Post
    I would move october and the date down so that it's not behind the ear things.
    I wouldn't change it, with the text behind the girl you have perspective that makes it interesting to look at, and holds your attention for longer than usual. If someone can't visualise that it says "october" there is something seriously wrong.
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    Quote Originally Posted by synthet1c View Post
    I wouldn't change it, with the text behind the girl you have perspective that makes it interesting to look at, and holds your attention for longer than usual. If someone can't visualise that it says "october" there is something seriously wrong.
    I have to disagree. If I saw a flyer that had october behind an object of any sort, I would lose attention. If I was walking by, and saw this on the street, I would much rather see october clearly than behind bat ears.
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    Rule one of flyers make the date clear and all the important info !!!!

    Just move it down a wee bit.............

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    it is a little distracting to have the october covered...move it or shorten it to Oct....but other than that...i like it...

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    Quote Originally Posted by synthet1c View Post
    I wouldn't change it, with the text behind the girl you have perspective that makes it interesting to look at, and holds your attention for longer than usual. If someone can't visualise that it says "october" there is something seriously wrong.
    It just looks kinda sloppy and not intentional having it slightly covered.
    Also OP i like the fade or black gradient around the edges nice touch.

    I would however move the Opacity back up on the "27Wonka" and "DJ Funke" just as i am assuming thats who is performing so it is probably a good idea for that too stand out to the viewer of the flyer. Makes it cleaner and lets the audience knows whats what.
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    It looks very intentional as he either needed to cut out the edge of the girl and create the background or use a mask on the text to allow the girls headband to show through.
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