Feedback on a track

[vpech013]

Hey guys, here is my last piece i was working on - i would greatly appreciate any feedback/suggestions
http://soundcloud.com/vitaly-pechers...f-original-mix
thanks!

[Lilac]

I really like the first couple of minutes. The drums really define the track as something catchy. Good beat and bassline.

Personally I feel that further into the track you got a bit carried away and overcomplicated it, I would have preferred it without the lyrics.

That's just my personal opinion though. If the entire track followed through on how it went in the first 2 minutes it would definitely be something I'd, at the very least, see an opportunity to play.

[vpech013]

ok thanks man!

[lolski]

the kick's a bit too much for me. too much distortion, and probably tone down the "oomph" a bit at around 70hz? that's just my opinion though. good luck with it!