Need a feedback on my first track!
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    Default Need a feedback on my first track!

    Hi guys please help me here... i just produced this track and need some feedback on it...anything would be great...places where ive fucked up and specific advice on the production etc basically everything u can say bout it....also please tell me how good is it a track as my first track...thanks a lot


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    Sounds like a video game track from the 80s.

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    Sounds like you're on the right track. Keep doing what your doing.
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    Quite nice for a first track!

    My suggestions would be to put more sound in the higher frequency, particularly on that synth and the snares. More definat hats too. I'd also really like a syncopated, tight snare with a bit of reverb. Like at the beginning, I wish that came back. Does the synth on the drop have sub base? I don't have a sub so I can't tell but I'd really like a base that underlines that synth. Did you use sidechain compression to duck the synth under the kick?

    I love the beginning and I'm not at all fond of the end. Far too straightforward with the kick - snare - kick - snare evenly spaced.

    Overall WONDERFUL first track! I hope you like the feedback. Great work, keep it up!

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    trust me you really know how much have you helped me by just posting this. Like motivated me a lot. thanks for this AWESOME feedback including what part you exactly liked and what part you dint.

    yup there's a sub bass at the drop and yes ive also sidechained the synth to the kick

    Thanks man loved the feedback.

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    Great! I'm glad it helped. Can you post the new version? I'd love to hear it!

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    Quote Originally Posted by kinnik View Post
    Great! I'm glad it helped. Can you post the new version? I'd love to hear it!
    Hi, currently I'm just working on a remix of Rockin' N Rollin' by Fedde le grand for a beatport contest so busy in that.

    Please follow me on sound cloud and would love any advice from you on any track : www.soundcloud.com/sagar_s

    gona upload the remix next week by 17the june.. and this is the first track im ever mastering so your advice would be great.

    Cheers

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