Trancy Deep Techno Track - Very first production

[Glint Eye]

Hey Everybody.

I finished my very first track and i wanted to spread it out, to get some feedback, which would be really nice,
because i'm still unsure about some things.

thanks in advance.

[Teaganbear]

For your first production, that sounds fantastic.

I like the raw intro. Very cool and I don't hear a track start like that often enough. When the beat drops, I instantly jump onboard the excitement train. You have a VERY good ear for mixing. I really like how refined the drums sound.

I wanted the groove to change though at about 1:10ish.. and was really hoping for a change at 1:30, so basically I would try to get to 1:50 FASTER if possible. Or add a big melody to it to keep it interesting.

2:18 is beautiful and not what I expected. The contrast from the slightly filthy, rugged intro is awesome. I love it especially at 2:55 when the filter goes away and it gets more staccato/short-noted. Awesome break.

3:20 could be WAY more epic. The bass that drones in is fantastic but I think you could make this part better by using white noise sweeps / cymbal FX / samples, whatever. Just something more.

I find 5:51 is way more exciting than the 32 bars that come before it. The outro is TIGHT. Well done in general.