Unfinished remix - Make this your day (trance)

[sj03w4t]

Hi y'all,
I thought I might just post my progress on a remix I've been working on lately. It's a remix to Fabio XB & Micky Vi's 'Make this your day'.

It is in no way finished but I like the vocals a lot so couldn't wait to work on this one
edit: please don't burn this down as this is one of my first more serious production/remix attempts..
edit 22/11 - I think it's done but it has been relocated here comments appreciated

[sj03w4t]

update: I've edited some parts, the intro and the end of this unfinished track is different.. Comment please

[sj03w4t]

okay I've edited it once again

[Fatlimey]

Easy with the cymbals there!

Good:
Powerful vocal
great bassline
good smooth texture
good choice of complimenting sounds.

Needs:
another melodic layer in there to support the lead
more careful selection and tweaking of hihat and snare sounds
the third section to come in earlier.
a reprise of earlier themes layered at the end
a run-out.

[sj03w4t]

Wow thanks for the feedback!
I lowered the volume on the crash, and replaced the hihat and added some fx to it. Also I added another layer arpeggiator which I quite like but hey that's why I added it..
I need to think about ending this song but not sure how yet..
Thanks again

edit: something went wrong with the uploading but I've uploaded it now. Should be cool in a couple of minutes!

[sj03w4t]

Darn, seems not to be working nicely. Another attempt:
soundcloud not cooperating.. check it out here!

[sj03w4t]

So I think I've finished this track and uploaded it to Soundcloud again because soundcloud wont let free users reupload a file -.-
Check it out and let me know what you think

[DennisJ]

solid remix. nice one.

[sj03w4t]

cheers mate

[Ed Paris]

hey mate! this is a very nice remix u did there! love the way u distorted the vocals it reminds me in some way of imogen heap - hide and seek.
keep on rocking