special pizza - personal pizza

[Killing time]

im working through this song right now, but i've hit a writers block. there seems to be all of this tension but no release.. anyone else get the same feel? any ideas? thanks.

[Kwal]

I like it. Bring some of the drums in/out to give it some variation. Also, you kinda gotta know where the song will go otherwise you'll be stuck forever. I know from experience lol. If you just build a song to build it without having a vision for it, you're screwed.

[Killing time]

thanks Kwal. im going back to the drawing board now. i'm going to try the backwards approach now.

[Kwal]

Anytime dude post your results here when finished

[Killing time]

took a different approach and got something completely different:

[LXJ]

The second track seems more unified compared to Special Pizza.