sound could use some more work. try to make the sound “fuller” when there are minimal layers playing e.g. the first 1.5 mins. then use dynamic EQing to lower the presence of these elements to make way for new elements
balance between instruments and vocals could be better too imo
bass should have more presence in the mix. add movement to it
Much appreciated man, I’ll probably redo my mixdown in time too. Thanks for the advice, but if you are giving criticism, which will be taken into account its always nice to hear what you think the better parts are to think about in respect to other tracks.