I made this track one month ago, i’ve spent about three weeks on it
I started making music for one year now, and i got a lot of problem getting feedbacks or help on my work…
That’s why i joined this forum, hoping to get some advice on my tracks
Please leave a feedback or advices to improve my work! i really need some thought on what i do to improve myself !
Hope you’ll enjoy guys, good listening
PS: By the way, i made a exp video with friends, along with this track:
The only constructive criticism I could provide is making the instrument levels a bit more dynamic - bringing them in and out and bringing them down overall a bit. A little bit of the melodic stuff you brought in later might be nice to gently weave in and break up from the 1 to 3 minute marks as well. But overall a really nice tune.